India has a lot of good foods but the food is picking biryani here's why most Muslims to eat biryani and many more countries do too but the main are Muslims. They also celebrate many cultures it depends on the style of the person. they have very yummy food because they have spices. and they have a bunch of eggs. they call it the cloud rice. they also have a lot of chicken and veggies. indifferent religions also eat biryani so most Indians eat biryani but other countries that are trade partners with India have enough recipes to make biryani so they it all around the world
I like how you're blog is about one food. Its very descriptive and I like how it shows a visualizing picture. You also focus on the cultures and how they celebrate them. The words also describe the picture pretty well. Sean I think you did a really job on this because it has almost everything but there is quite a bit of spelling errors, I just wanted to let you know that you should work on your spelling errors next time.
ReplyDeleteI like how much detail you put into this blog, it is vary descriptive. You did a really good job finding a picture that fit your writing so well. You also have a couple of writing mistakes at the beginning of your piece. You also inserted you image wrong cutting off the word world you could also add more detail on what it tastes like or something else to add more depth, but altogether you did pretty well on this piece.
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